Bit of a departure in subject matter here but I’ve learned you just have to go with your gut on these things. Very enjoyable and a great combination of subjects.
Every time I walk past the Marlborough City Hall building I think - I'd really like to paint that. Today was the day and it was a bit of a struggle and not very satisfying. I intentionally cropped quite tightly as cityscapes can get very busy. This should simplify things and make for a better painting. There's some good stuff here but, as so often, not enough. Will have to try again to do it justice.
I knew going in that this was going to be a stretch. But I labored on and although it's by no means a success there are parts that came together. The dark walls and ceiling have some ice rich color and texture and there's some subtlety in the shadow areas that I like. But definitely an experiment for me.
Yes I'm a glutton for punishment. I'm still on the path of getting to the heart of Joseph Zbukvic's style. This one is more successful than most. The colors are nicely muted and most things are suggested rather than explicit. The brushwork, especially around the windows came off rather well. All in all I think this goes in the success bucket.
I have to say that the actual painting of this went really quickly. There is very little detail in here apart from the odd piece around the roofs and windows. Almost surprised me when I came to the end and thought 'Yeah - it's done!'.
Well this didn't go well. Almost didn't post this at all. Brushes were almost flung aside in disgust but for completeness here it is. I'm not going to comment right now but will post a collage and commentary next. Hopefully I can formulate a plan and see if I can glean some insight from this set of 9 village paintings.
Anyway - here are the intermediates :
Day 8. More buildings. I skipped the value study again today which was probably a mistake but I'm still not convinced they make a huge difference.
After yesterday's extremely limited palette which was a bit more extreme than I intended I pulled back a bit color wise. I think this works better and definitely better than the zappo reds and greens of two days ago. Not over the moon with this - I wanted to catch the light on the buildings and the church tower more but didn't get there. I like the sky - a soft grey wash on top which warms up with cadium orange below. I even like the water sploshes which add interest. The trees are reasonable - definitely better greens here mostly made out of burnt sienna and indigo. The buildings I'm so-so about but I've definitely done worse.
Some intermediates : the initial drawing :
This is where a value study could have helped. Some awkwardness in the roof angles crept in which I should have caught.
Next - the sky and first washes :
Good texture in the foreground trees. The roofs are a bit meh.
Starting to beef up the church and the roofs. There's some nice variation in the roof colors which was done by adding color and dripping water in wet in wet.
When I plucked out the photo for today I wasn't best pleased and I wondered why on earth I'd picked it in the first place. Here it is :
I remembered yesterday and how I should have concentrated on the bits that interested me so I cropped down to the buildings on the right hand side :
I ditched the value study here. They're making me lose enthusiasm so I skipped this part just for today. I'd decided to keep the colors more muted (no jelly beans) and had been practicing some greys and greens that weren't too in your face. Starting with the sky I moved to a grey wash at the top that warmed up towards the horizon with some cadmium orange. It looked pretty good and I changed my original plan for the buildings. In the photo they're light and a warm pinky yellow. I went for a much greyer look and darker than the sky. Who knows what would happen?
The grey went in well. I kept some interest in the washes by adding in water and kept some white paper here and there. The trees were again kept to a muted color (Indigo and burnt sienna mostly) and I faded the color out towards the bottom of the paper.
I'm pretty happy so far (currently waiting for it to dry). I need to go back in and pump up some of the darks. I need to be careful not to make them too dark - fingers crossed.
The final thing. Just a few touch ups on the darks to define the windows and the roofs.
For a change I was quite looking forward to this one as it has a lot more interest than some of the previous ones. And to be fair there's a lot of good here. Trees came out well, I managed to keep the lights for the sign and the church hangs together reasonably well. But to be honest I was bored and the final picture is just a bit dull. It's all a bit too literal.
But let's go through the process. First the value sketch:
Yeah not bad. Plenty to work with here. Learning from yesterday I'm not making the trees too dark and also varying across the picture. Think it's working. Onto the final drawing :
Yup no problems here. Shapes are good. Not too much detail. Onto the first washes:
Still feeling pretty good. Maybe a bit worried about the color in the church.
It was about here that I started to lose interest. I wasn't particularly happy with the church and my enthusiasm for the trees was waning. I mean - it looks fine but just a bit dull.
Almost finished thankfully. The left hand trees came out well although they are very GREEN!
The final thing. As I felt things weren't going anywhere I beefed up a few areas. Darkened the foreground and put more color in the sky. Don't think I made it worse.
So all in all everything was a bit 'meh'. If I had to do it again I'd probably make the church larger and the main focus (I am meant to be doing buildings aren't I?) My favorite bit is probably the sign in the foreground which says something.
I say this every day with this series but 'I wasn't looking forward to this one'. However (with the usual caveat of maybe I'll go off it in a couple of days) I really felt like I'm getting somewhere finally. The colors are great, the execution is confident without being sloppy, and there are some good touches here and there. A good days work for once.
For subject matter I'm just picking photos from pixabay.com at random in these practice pieces and pulling them out in the order I found them. The original photo was a bit bland, lots of blank walls but with some nice shadows here and there. Here's the original :
Not my first choice really but it's what was on the docket.
Started with a value sketch :
Getting the values of the shadows on the buildings was important. If you look in the corner on the ground on the right hand side of the main building you can see that even though all is in shadow you need slightly different values to make things read correctly.
Onto the drawing :
This is done in a different style to the value sketch. It's line only and I'm concentrating on making good shapes. Note how the windows on the right hand side especially are quite loosely drawn but with very specific shapes. As I've mentioned before you can pull windows about quite a lot and they'll still read as windows.
So I'm happy so far. Now onto the first washes :
I should mention at this point that I usually paint sitting down at an easel. I changed for this as my washes were falling down the paper too fast. I painted this standing up with the board at a slight angle. Felt a lot better and I'll probably carry on.
Anyway - still happy here. Washes look good and there's some extra color in the walls for interest.
Now onto some darks :
This is where it usually unravels. I have a tendency to go too dark in places where darks shouldn't be and I'm trying hard to pull back. A bit worried at this point. That middle building in shade is too yellow so my plan is to glaze over it later. Fingers crossed it all reads well in the end. On the plus side the window in shade with the shutters came out really well.
Onwards - trees and the rest of the darks next :
Almost done here. The trees went in pretty well. Didn't fuss around with them although the right hand side one could probably be a little lighter in value (grrr). The glazing of the yellow building went well and fits in with everything else. Quietly confident at this point.
And now the final thing :
Not too much has changed here. More interest in the walls and a little tidying up here and there. The big change is the addition of an additional shadow. I felt the walls were looking too bard so invented a mid size shadow to break it up. I think it works.
So pretty happy with this. Long may it continue.