I really need to generate some inventory but I'm on a mission trying to push this style and can't let go.
I wouldn't usually tackle a view like this with washes and dry brush and glazing the shadows. I'd tackle it all in one and make sure to lose a lot of edges and soften things up quite a lot. I'd also usually throw in a lot more color (for better or worse).
So how am I feeling about this? Not desperately unhappy but not over the moon and it definitely won't make it to the inventory page. The values seem ok to me - maybe the darks are a little too dark in places. Color is ok - no jelly beans. One thing I really struggled with was trying to get some texture into the dark shadows. I was splattering, adding in color, overglazing, spritzing water drops but all to pretty much no avail. Shame.
An intermediate shot: